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How to Add to Your Word Count for NaNoWriMo Without Killing Your Plot

On By Kristina Van HooseIn NaNoWriMo, Writing5 Comments

For National Novel Writing Month, participants need to write 50,000 words in order to win. The prizes include a certificate you can print, bragging rights, and some offers from the various sponsors like Scrivener and CreateSpace.

In the seven years that I’ve been a participant, I’ve seen all sorts of strategies. Sure, there are the rebels who work on multiple stories, master theses and other non-novel work. However, there are some more dubious tricks that I’ve read about.

Having your character start singing an entire broadway musical, reciting recipes, or giving all your characters super long names with just one difference (e.g. Abe Braham Carter Day and Abe Braham Carter Ed) so that you have to refer to them by their full name, DO in fact increase word count. However, these sorts of methods have the tendency to derail your story. After you get through the final act of that musical, where will you from there?

People use these types of “plot devices” as a way to get their 50K. They’ve hit a dead end in their plot, and instead of hunting “plot bunnies,” they do what they can to just add words. The problem with these methods is that they don’t help your plot at all. Instead, they add meaningless words and help keep a true plot at bay.

To me, it’s the same as getting a large cat. Those plot bunnies aren’t going to come your way if they see a big cat on your front step just like ideas aren’t going to come if you keep resorting to meaningless word count methods.

come-here-plot-bunny
I see you there delicious looking plot bunny.

Now, just to clarify, I am not saying you can’t use some of the dares in your novel. Some of them are helpful and will add plot and conflict to your novel. Lyrics and recipes generally do not.

I already mentioned a few strategies in my last post, and actually a couple here are duplicates because they’re great strategies.

With that in mind, here are a few strategies you can resort to when push comes to shove, and your plot bunnies are avoiding you as if you had Swine Flu.

1. Mini-Excursions
This is when your characters take a break from the main plot to pursue something else. Then, once that subplot is revolved, they go back to the main plot and continue on with their day.

For example, they can be walking down the road in search of the Powerful Deadly Overlord of Cheese and end up seeing something shiny in the bushes. Intrigued, they investigate and find a set of keys. Now, being the heroes they are, they decide to find the rightful owners of the keys, because of course keys are always important. Once they find the owner, they can go back to searching for the Powerful Deadly Overlord of Cheese. Perhaps they even get an award that will later be of value.

2. Have a fight
Now, there might already be a fight planned for the end. It’s usually between the antagonist and the protagonist. However, there are other fights.

  • A fight between your MC (main character) and his/her love interest?
  • A fight between the MC and his/her best friend.
  • A disagreement between your MC and his/her horse.
  • Maybe there’s danger ahead and your MC is too stupid to realize it.
  • Maybe someone actually gets (Swine) Flu
  • Or there’s the all favorite, “we were quietly minding our own business when a group of bandits jumped out of the bushes.”

Conflict moves a story forward, so don’t be afraid to resort to a little violence.

3. Throw a party

have-a-party
Let’s party like it’s 1979!

Parties make people mingle. It is a great way to introduce a new character or even a great way to hear the latest gossip. Maybe your MC goes to the party in hopes of finding information about the antagonist. And, if you’re really struggling, you can always have a party turn into a fight.

4. Switch characters

Write a chapter from a different character’s point of view. (Bonus tip: this works well when dealing with fights and some conflict because you can see both sides)

Jump over to your MC’s best friend or even a minor character. Sometimes you’ll find a different character can tell the story better. Perhaps you’ll realize you chose the wrong MC. Or perhaps you’ll get an insight on an event that you wouldn’t have thought about before.

Write from the antagonist’s point of view. Seeing the story from their side will help you understand their motivation better and help you gain sympathy for him or her. Or it. A sympathetic villain is a more powerful one in my opinion. No one likes the “Mr. Gloom and Doom with a PHD in Taking Over the Universe Because He’s Bored” sort of villain. They’re too flat.

Completely stuck? Write a previous scene with a different outcome. Where does the story take you now?

5. Remember, remember, the 5th of November, the Gun Powder Treason and plot…

I want to watch V for Vendetta now, but let's wait until December, eh?
Guy Fawkes Mask

On many NaNo calendars, you’ll note that the 5th of November has “Blow something up” in honor of Guy Fawkes day. If your world or story has gunpowder, blow something up. If it doesn’t, plan some other sort of natural disaster or terrorist plan or homicide. Mass murders and disaster tend to bring people together – and drive people apart due to differing opinions.

6. Flashbacks.
Flashbacks offer a look into your character’s history as well as the history of the life and culture around him or her. Sometimes, flashbacks can even help you untangle your thoughts and discover plots.

7. Recapping
Admit it. There are a lot of characters out there with the sole purpose of recapping. I tend to think of Dumbledore on this one from Harry Potter. They are often considered cliché, but hey, this is NaNo! And, it’s a rough draft.

Go ahead. Have a character recap some of the things that have happened so far. I will caution you though. Don’t go back to look through the story. Reading what you have already written tends to make the inner editor come out. It also tends to make you lose self-confidence. Write about what you recall. It’ll be more accurate that way too. No character, unless they have a photographic memory, is going to remember everything that’s happened. Feel free to have other characters fill in the gaps as you recall them later.

8. Kill someone off
Death moves the plot forward … or at least, for those who live. A death of someone close to the MC can really impact him or her. Have your MC go through the stages of grief, from denial to acceptance. Have a funeral. Throw in some cultural beliefs and funeral preparations/traditions. Maybe your MC’s species or race or group don’t believe in burial. Maybe they don’t believe in an afterlife. This can be really helpful if you decide you don’t like your MC or if you realize your minor character really ought to be your MC. Kill him or her off and start writing from another character’s perspective.

If you decide later on that you need that character, you can always bring them back.

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Zombie anyone?

9. Take a dare or adopt something from the NaNo forums.
Go to the NaNo forum. Pick up a dare and run with it. Or visit the adoptables forum and find something that needs a new, loving home in your novel. You know, unless you decide to kill it. Hopefully it was loved until then at least.

Do NOT spend forever choosing a dare or adoptable though. The forums have been known to consume many a writer during the month of November.

In Closing
As you can see, there are lots of things you can resort to when the plot well is running dry that can help keep you moving. Don’t get scared when the story seems to be going nowhere. It happens. Just keep pushing forward and you’ll find something to work with eventually.

Sometimes placing yourself in the story helps too. Have your character argue with you a bit. Get to know your character a little more. And keep going. Yes, the best thing in NaNo is to just keep going.

If worse comes to worse, and you absolutely cannot think of anything using these methods, ask for help from the other writers. Twitter is wonderful for this as is the forums. The NaNoWriMo community is one of the kindest online communities out there. There is bound to be someone who can help you out.

Your Turn

What tips or strategies would you add to this list?  If you’re working on a writing project, how is it going?

Can’t comment here? Feel free to continue the conversation onTwitter or Facebook with me!

What to do When You Get Stuck During NaNoWriMo

On By Kristina Van HooseIn NaNoWriMo, Writing2 Comments

Tuesday was a pretty dismal day for writing. I only managed 700-something words, which was atrocious compared to the previous two days. I ran into the problem because I a) left off in an uneventful moment rather than an action infused one, b) did not do much world building before beginning this project, and c) still needed to figure out an important conflict between the main character and his brother.

Those 700-something words came at a struggle. We’re talking a several painstaking hours to get them instead of the 45 minutes it usually takes.

While it is always frustrating, it is even more so during National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) or when you have any sort of deadline.

So what do you do?

Faced with that experience you might be tempted to panic and bang your head against the wall, your desk, and your computer before throwing said computer across the room and swear never to write again.

Like this guy. He looks like he's had better days.
Like this guy. He looks like he’s had better days. (From Pixabay)

However, that would be sad because you would never finish your story.

I suppose since the experience is fresh in my mind, I can explain what I did on the offhand chance it helps you get those plot wheels back in motion. So here we go!

Option 1: Write Out Your Thoughts and Options, AKA Brainstorm in Writing

Try to work out your problem with words so that you can still count them and still be making headway in your novel. I summed up what had happened so far without going back to read.

I knew it was time to problem solve, so I started typing to myself in the middle of my document, though I’ve used other documents too for this purpose in the past.

You’re probably thinking, “But what do you write when you’re stuck though? If I had something to write down, I would have by now!”

Well, you write to yourself. I ended up writing down everything I was thinking. No, no, not the “Oh my goodness this novel is terrible! Why did I sign up for this? Why did I start this project?”

No, no! None of that belongs there. Those words must not be said nor written. They are an evil beast waiting to sink its teeth into you until you begin believing those words. After that, there is little hope left as a writer. You might as well find another career or find a support group to help you overcome that. Then you should probably get vaccinated in case it had rabies or worse – left you with self-doubt that presents itself as flashbacks to those horrible words forever ingrained in your mind.

So no. Don’t write anything negative. Instead, we’re problem solving, so anything relating to the problem is allowed.

For me, it started like this:

Ok so, we have a story of a shapeshifter. His name is Kaleb. Caleb? I like the K but I don’t know. He meets a human with witch powers named Anne (Annali?). She wants to find her family because she’s been separated after other humans tried to kill them all in fear for their lives because one of her own started to kill humans for their souls.

I know. That’s pretty cringeworthy, but it’s what I came up with when I was writing to myself. Did I ever tell you I can be extremely wordy? Oh wait, you probably figured that out by reading my blog. I suppose that’s why I can get to 50k so easily.

Anywho, moving on…

I continued talking to myself via writing (and totally counting the words mind you!) until I got tired. I had a few possible directions to head towards, so I decided to sleep on it. At that point, there really is not point in staying up and beating your head against the desk anymore. Sometimes, the mind really just needs a break.

I woke up the next day (after thinking all night about it too. It was literally my last thought) and jotted down more ideas. I did a little research too since my main dilemma was that I hadn’t done any research or world building in the beginning.

This novel idea was a very late one, so I had no idea what to expect from it. It was the one I was most excited about writing though, so I went with it rather than the one I did more planning for.

I ended up writing down some hand written notes because sometimes it helps me connect better since it is a bit more tangible.

That’s one strategy, but what if it doesn’t work?

Option 2: Start a new scene with a conflict

The next best thing is to just start a new scene with some sort of conflict. It doesn’t matter what the conflict is. Just let your characters deal with it. See how they react. Even if it is a scene that is later deleted, you will gain some insight into how your characters operate.

There are all sorts of conflicts. Think about fights you’ve had with others. What started it? Look at the news. What sort of things have led to conflict between individuals? Countries? Communities?

It can be something as tiny as your main character never gave back their best friend’s shirt and now it’s missing or ruined or the antagonist peed on it. Okay, so that might be a little strange. Unless your antagonist is a dog.

Option 3: Do Some Mundane, Physical Task

Take a walk. Take a shower. Do the laundry. Vacuum. What other chore have you been procrastinating on in order to write? Take fifteen minutes and do them now. Remember, it is best if it is physical and it doesn’t involve using your brainpower. TV watching or any other screen involved activity is a no go for this one.

While you’re on autopilot, your brain can start wandering. It might just discover an idea.

And because you’re doing something physical, you’ll be getting some much needed exercise away from your computer.

Back to My Story

After brainstorming through writing (option 1), I found some mundane, physical tasks to accomplish (option 2) like walking around, playing with my cat, taking a shower, and playing fetch with the dog.

I eventually introduced a new character by coming up with my main character’s family members and their stories, which also provided some conflict (option 2). All of that ended up bringing me to a new scene with conflict (option 2), which helped me gain another 3,000 or so words.

In the end, it worked for me. There is still a lot of research I need to do. I gave myself some time to satisfy my curiosity and inner editor enough to understand how some genetics work out in my world, and then I made myself write.

Sometimes in the end, telling yourself to write anything that comes to mind is the only thing we can do. Creativity will never come when you call it. You have to go out in search of it.

If you’re stuck, give these strategies a try. If they don’t work, try reaching out in the NaNoWriMo forums, on Twitter, or here in the comments. Someone is bound to have a solution for you.

And stay tuned for Monday where I give a few more strategies to add to your word count without killing your plot, which is especially important when week 2 starts.

Your Turn

What do you do when your stuck on a project? It doesn’t even have to be a writing project. If you’re working on a writing project, how is it going?

Can’t comment here? Feel free to continue the conversation onTwitter or Facebook with me!

8 Tips for Winning NaNoWriMo

On By Kristina Van HooseIn NaNoWriMo, Writing5 Comments

NaNoWriMo, also known as National Novel Writing Month, is quickly approaching. I’ve won six times now, which I suppose gives me enough knowledge to provide information that would help others win. I’ve had several people ask me what advice I have, so here they are: 8 short and simple tips to improve your odds of winning.

#1: Reverse NaNo

Reverse NaNo is a concept that has you writing more words at first and then finishing on day 30 with one word. I tried it one year and never looked back. It takes into account my overwhelming enthusiasm on day one and my “is it over yet because I’m tired” feeling on day thirty.

The best part about it is that you are always over where you need to be according to the NaNoWriMo stats, which makes you feel like writing more and more even when most people are wallowing in the terror that is Week 2.

So where can you find the word counts then?

I haven’t been able to discover who created the idea and there are a couple variations, but I have a page with calendars with daily and/or total word counts per day here. Someone has created a PDF file here. There’s also an Excel file from 2014 here from kiazishiru.com.

If that isn’t your style, kiazishiru.com has other options too here including low weekdays and high weekends.

#2: Planning Helps – Even if You’re a Pantser

I am a notorious pantser, which means I come up with ideas on the go. I think you’d have to agree that it is ironic considering I have that massive list of over 100 planning tools.

If you like planning, I suggest you check out the list since it covers just about everything from character development, world building, dialogue, and even revision. I can’t really tell you how to go about using those since I’m not a planner, so hopefully exploring will help you figure your story out.

However, if you’re a pantser like me, I find it is most successful to at least have your characters figured out. By that I mean, know their names and what they want out of the story. Knowing your main conflict is helpful as well because it means you’re always going towards something. Of course, I know part of the excitement, at least for me, is discovering the plot as you go. For that reason, I usually know what the main problem is but never bother to figure out how the characters get there/discover it or what the resolution is.

Even when I plan, I never know the resolution because I tend to now want to write the story anymore.

Speaking of knowing things, if you’re a pantser, it may be in your best interest to have a couple of backup ideas just in case you get stuck. That has saved me every year.

#3: Write about something that gets you excited

This year, I intend to work an on entirely new project instead of a work in progress like I usually do. I had two ideas, one of which was continuing Raveek’s story. The other was a previous NaNo idea entitled At Plot’s End that never got very far because I abandoned it in favor of something I had already been working on. Now though, I have a new idea that I just discovered within the last couple of days.

I’m really excited about that idea, currently titled Wolf at the Door. I know that enthusiasm will help carry me through NaNoWriMo. Will it carry me all the way through? I suppose it depends on how much planning I’ve done, which is minimal since the idea is so fresh.

#4: Don’t be afraid to change ideas midway

If an idea isn’t working for you, remember rule #2 and swap it out for something else.

Every year except the first, I have dropped my original plan and worked on something else. While it means I am no longer working on one continuous story, I believe it is still enough to allow me to win because I am writing. That is the main focus and drive behind NaNoWriMo. It’s to turn you from wannabe writer to Writer.

#5: Lock away that inner editor until December

If you need to, write in white on white so you can’t see what you’re writing. Turn off suggestions and editing in Word. Remember that your inner editor will have plenty of work to do, just not right now. Instead, the creative genius gets to type whatever he or she wants to even if it doesn’t make sense. The inner editor will take care of the diamond in the rough ideas and the character that continually reappears even though they’ve died fifteen times.

#6: If you don’t like a scene, put in an archive for later; don’t delete it completely!

All the ideas I have for this year are due to subplots and plotlines that didn’t work in other projects. I am constantly mining my archive of deadends to find a beginning for a new project. So just because it does not work in this story doesn’t mean it won’t work later on in another project.

#7: Remember, no one has to read it but you.

You don’t even have to read it if you don’t want to at the end. Give it your best shot and approach NaNo in a way that makes you happy. Even if you decide that writing isn’t for you after this or your story should never see the light of day again, you have gained valubale experience in the writing world.

Next time you read a book you don’t like, you’ll have an appreciation for what the author went through.

Next time you write a story, you’ll be a quicker typer and better at putting together scenes. After all, they say it takes 10,000 hours to get good at something. All those hours you put into NaNoWriMo, even if it results in the worst story in the world, is fantastic practice for the next work of art.

#8: Participate in Word Sprints and Word Wars & Write Ins!

The competition is bound to drive you to write more. You can find them on Twitter through: @nanowordsprints via #NaNoWordSprints, @latenightsprints, @TheSprintShack, and @NaNoWriMo

Lastly, your area might have a local write in you can attend; however, if you’re shy or in a rural area, don’t forget about the virtual write ins every Wednesday and Saturday (plus November 1st). This link should take you to add their Google Calendar to yours. Sadly, I don’t know the URL to just view it.

You can also go to YouTube and see when the next scheduled virtual write in is. If you see me, feel free to say hi!

#9: Bonus Tip for After NaNoWriMo

No matter how great you think your novel is after November, revise and edit it before you dare publish it

People who don’t do this give NaNoWriMo and self publishing a bad name. Don’t be that person. Polish it up and then look for beta readers either in the critique section of the forums or in a place like Scribophile.

Your Turn

Any tips you would add for success? 

Any thing you want to know about NaNoWriMo?

Are you participating? If I haven’t added you as a buddy yet, send me a request at KristinaVH

Can’t comment here? Feel free to continue the conversation on Twitter or Facebook with me!

Monday Must Read

On By Kristina Van HooseIn Writing Reference3 Comments

This week the “Monday Must Read” is writing focused.

Finding the Right Type of Publishing for You by Cristen Iris

Gives the pros and cons to traditional, indie, partner, hybrid, and self publishing. I didn’t even know there were so many options! Did you?

A Gigantic List of Places to Advertise Your Self Published Book by Ana Spoke

She just recently published her own book, Shizzle, Inc. She’s been sharing her experience ever since. This post is just one of several helpful posts documenting her journey and the experience. Definitely recommended to anyone in the process of or considering self publishing.

DARKNESS: Reading & Voting Poll

Several writers have responded to the Darkness prompt at Brigit’s Flame. Make sure you stop by and read their entries and give them some feedback! Don’t forget to vote for your favorite!

Fireworks at twilight with "The Celebration" written in white

The Celebration – Fiction

On By Kristina Van HooseIn Short Stories26 Comments

Word Count: 1569

Prompt: Darkness

Constructive criticism is always welcomed!

Raveek tried not to show his impatience as his younger sister, Lareen, looked at herself in the mirror. She brushed her hair yet again and pursed her lips.

“You look fine,” he told her.

“Today is a big deal. I want to look better than fine,” she countered. She put on more makeup and then appeared to take it off with a small rag.

He sighed and sat down on her bed. Today may have taken him an extra five minutes to get ready. Maybe. “We’re going to be late at this rate. You look beautiful without the makeup. If you look any more beautiful, people will think you’re a goddess.”

She smiled at him in the mirror. “Won’t you make your future wife happy?”

“Yes, yes, now can we go?”

“Help me put my necklace on first.”

He stood up and went to her. She lifted her hair up as he put the necklace on from behind. He was surprised to see that the top of her head was now at his chin. “When did you get so tall?”

Laughing, she turned to face him. “This country is doomed if you are to ever rule it. You’re so oblivious.”

“I’m not oblivious, I-”

She raised her hands in defeat and motioned to her new shoes.

“Ah. See. I noticed things were a bit off.”

“The people shall thank you.” She laughed and made her way to the door. “Are you coming? You’re going to make us late just standing there.”

He hated how she always made it his fault somehow. He escorted her down the stairs and to the main hall. Passing the windows, they could hear the cheering outside from those who could not make it inside.

“How many people do you think are out there?” Lareen asked.  

“Sounds like a lot. I didn’t think there were this many people this far north. Maybe they haven’t let anyone in yet.”

“There you two are!” their mother said. “I was starting to think you were going to miss the announcement!” She swooped in on them and began messing with their clothes and hair.

“We look fine,” Raveek muttered before catching his sister’s glance. “I mean, better than fine.”

“Yes, we do. I’m just … it’s all so exciting, isn’t it?” Her cheeks were flushed.

Raveek glanced at his father. Was he sweating? It wasn’t that hot. Autumn was here, and there was a definite chill in the air from the wind blowing through the open windows. “Are you nervous?” he asked his father.

“Well, son, I have to say, it’s not every day this happens to me. I guess maybe. Err, I’m fine.” He cleared his throat. “Are we ready?”

Raveek nodded, and since everyone was in agreement, his father gave notice that they were ready. His father took his mother’s arm to escort her. Raveek turned to his sister to do the same only to find her chewing on her lip. It was a nervous habit of hers. “My lipstick!” she realized before searching her pockets.

“You look beautiful,” he reassured her. “It’s not smudged.”

“Are you sure?”

“Positive.”

The crowd in the next room began to cheer as the door opened. His parents exited the hall, leaving the two siblings alone.

“Okay,” Lareen said. “We can’t keep them waiting.”

Taking her by the arm, Raveek escorted her into the next room. All around them were various neighbors and people who had come to see the ceremony. Today was a significant day, one that he knew would be written in the history books. His father had just become the first elected official in his country. The people were no longer stuck with dictating families ruling for centuries; finally they had a say in it all.

Raveek and his sister took their place beside their parents as his father addressed the people.

“Today is a glorious day. We, the ordinary people, have decided who rules this country, and we have decided that it is a joint effort. We will no longer have to bow down to the elite aristocracy that once tried to destroy us. Instead, we will move forward, together, into a new age of peace.

“Make no mistake: this day did not come easily. We all know many suffered to get us here today. We lost many wonderful individuals in our fight for freedom. To those who knew them personally, I apologize for your loss. I wish you peace in knowing their lives were not sacrificed blindly. I fought alongside some of them and knew a few personally. It’s in their memory that I am here today to oversee this country in a way that keeps us all united as one. I learned from the mistakes of those who came before me, and I will continue to learn from all of you standing with me. Let’s take a moment to remember those who now watch over us.”

Raveek bowed his head. He remembered the nights that his mother and sister cried after his father went to war. He had consoled both of them until his father returned. While Raveek did not complain about being the man of the house in his father’s stead, he was relieved when his father returned to take the position. It had been far more strenuous than he had ever imagined, and it gave Raveek a new appreciation for him.

“Thank you,” his father said to the crowd. “Today is a celebration for our country and our people, both living and dead. To freedom and the brighter days ahead!” He raised a glass to the crowd. They had glasses too, though Raveek hadn’t noticed any of that when walking into the room. Someone handed him a glass, which he raised before taking a drink.

The crowd began to cheer again; it didn’t seem real. Raveek had never imagined a fate such as this for his family, especially once his father went to war. But here they were.

His parents were dancing, people were celebrating, and Lareen was talking to her friends. Raveek noticed a pretty girl staring at him. Was that a blush? Perhaps he should go see for himself. He made his way to her with a large smile on his face. She was smiling too. She opened her mouth to say something.

And screamed.

“Are you okay?” he asked. Was he that repulsive?

She screamed again and ran.

Suddenly everyone seemed to be screaming at once. People were running away. He turned around. His father was lying on the ground in a puddle of blood. His mother was at his side screaming and trying to hold him.

“No…”

The man behind her stabbed her with a sword before Raveek could say anything else. The surviving bodyguards were in the middle of a sword fight with individuals that looked as though they could have been friends in different circumstances. Why were they fighting?

Lareen!

He searched the area where he had last seen her. There was no body. That has to be a good sign, right? He rushed outside where more bodies laid on the ground. “Lareen!” he shouted. “Lareen! Where are you?”

His mind began to conjure images of her sprawled out on the ground covered in blood like his father or stabbed in front of him like his mother. He heard metal against metal somewhere behind him. His mind started picturing a sword plunging through his chest or severing his head.

Stop, stop. This isn’t helping. Pull yourself together! Dad would expect better of you!

He rubbed his face. Were those tears? Snap out of it, Raveek! He tried to tell himself that in his father’s voice, but it only sounded like a scared little boy. He wished he had a weapon.

“Lareen!”

She’d go home. She’d know to meet me there. Right? Unless she-

No. Don’t go there. She’s alive.

He didn’t remember walking, but somehow he had covered some distance from the newly reclaimed castle where his parents had … had what?

What if they weren’t dead? The thought sickened him. What if I just abandoned them to die? Do I go back? What if Lareen is still in the castle too?

He turned towards the castle. “No, no, no!” He watched helplessly as the lower level of the castle began to burn. The flames claimed the wood just as they would claim his parents and his sister if they were still alive inside.

He vomited.

Now what? He forced himself to clean off his face with a handful of leaves. People still shouted and screamed in the distance. Somewhere someone was defending themselves with a sword. He wanted to shout Lareen’s name again, but he realized now that it was too dangerous.

The fire at the castle had swallowed up the darkness around it. Without it, it would be difficult to see. He looked up at the empty sky. Had the moon turned on them too? Fireworks began to explode in the sky above the castle. The fire had found them too.

He had no clue what those responsible would do next. If they found his sister… He stopped the thought before it could completely form. He watched the fire burn higher for a moment before slipping into the darkened safety of the forest. If Lareen had headed home, it was only a matter of time before someone found her.

He only hoped he could reach her first.