Comments on: Insomnia – Fiction https://kristinavanhoose.com/2015/08/08/insomnia-fiction/ Sun, 13 Mar 2016 02:41:17 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Kristina Van Hoose https://kristinavanhoose.com/2015/08/08/insomnia-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-209 Wed, 12 Aug 2015 17:27:49 +0000 http://kristinavanhoose.com/?p=396#comment-209 So it needs to be lay down apparently. Whoever decided the past tense of lie should be lay must’ve been drunk, lol ]]> By: Kathy Boles-Turner https://kristinavanhoose.com/2015/08/08/insomnia-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-207 Wed, 12 Aug 2015 11:39:46 +0000 http://kristinavanhoose.com/?p=396#comment-207 Wow … meet the animals before moving in!

This was entertaining, Kristina. My one issue is with your use of “lied down”. Here’s a link to an article that demonstrates the correct use of lay, lie, laid. Fun with grammar!😉

]]> By: t.s.wright https://kristinavanhoose.com/2015/08/08/insomnia-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-199 Tue, 11 Aug 2015 11:03:45 +0000 http://kristinavanhoose.com/?p=396#comment-199 The human was foolish enough to think he was superior…mwahahaha

Excellent story.:)

]]> By: Kristina Van Hoose https://kristinavanhoose.com/2015/08/08/insomnia-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-165 Tue, 11 Aug 2015 05:03:09 +0000 http://kristinavanhoose.com/?p=396#comment-165 LOL. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I sadly can relate too. I’m a first time cat owner, and it’s been … interesting.

He might just be desperate enough to give that a try, haha.

]]> By: Shane Bell https://kristinavanhoose.com/2015/08/08/insomnia-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-164 Tue, 11 Aug 2015 04:43:36 +0000 http://kristinavanhoose.com/?p=396#comment-164 You had me at “cat”

=^.^=

Seriously though, very fun. And relatable. I have four cats…and i sleep or have sex on their whims.

I think Rick just needed to assert himself as the alpha cat. Maybe he should have peed on Chester?

]]> By: Vibrant https://kristinavanhoose.com/2015/08/08/insomnia-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-162 Mon, 10 Aug 2015 18:58:14 +0000 http://kristinavanhoose.com/?p=396#comment-162 Oh alright. I would read your posts tomorrow and then vote.:) ]]> By: Kristina Van Hoose https://kristinavanhoose.com/2015/08/08/insomnia-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-161 Mon, 10 Aug 2015 18:20:28 +0000 http://kristinavanhoose.com/?p=396#comment-161 The prompt was based off an eoisode title of the walking dead. I just kept the character name and the general idea of being hunted by something. ]]> By: Vibrant https://kristinavanhoose.com/2015/08/08/insomnia-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-160 Mon, 10 Aug 2015 18:00:57 +0000 http://kristinavanhoose.com/?p=396#comment-160 But you wrote something similar? ]]> By: Vibrant https://kristinavanhoose.com/2015/08/08/insomnia-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-159 Mon, 10 Aug 2015 16:59:36 +0000 http://kristinavanhoose.com/?p=396#comment-159 I would read the stories and then vote. So far I have not read even “The Text.” I so wanted to read it. I would read them soon:) ]]> By: Kristina Van Hoose https://kristinavanhoose.com/2015/08/08/insomnia-fiction/comment-page-1/#comment-158 Mon, 10 Aug 2015 16:58:53 +0000 http://kristinavanhoose.com/?p=396#comment-158 I haven’t seen the show either. ]]>